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If my love were a flame
It would never extinguish
If my love were a tree
It would stand proud and tall
If my love were a sail
Never would it tatter
If my love were a a diamond
It would shine brightest of all

If my love were a song
It would be everlasting
If my love were a bird
How high it would fly!
If my love were a pillar
Never would it falter
If my lover were a flower
Never would it die

If my love was the Sun
Night would never come
If my love were a word
It would be too sacred to pen
If my love were a bell
Its ring would be sweet
I love you, my angel
Forever
Amen
:iconsailorxxchibixxmoon:

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I wrote this two months ago one night when I couldn't sleep.

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:icondiredigression:
Very nice! The rhythm is good throughout it. I like the 2nd stanza!

'It's ring'- I believe there shouldn't be an apostrophe there.

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Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.
-Robert Frost
:iconsailorxxchibixxmoon:
You're right. Thanks!

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Pardon me for my tardiness, my Walk has gotten much Sillier of late.

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:icondiredigression:
No prob!

--
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.
-Robert Frost

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